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SPIRIT
A mortal walks and empty path
A twisted soul
A burned out husk
A wall built against the world
A hurt so deep it can never show

Bring me out of this pain
Bring me out of this sorrow
Bring me to a world full of love
Bring me to a place where the tears cease to flow

A lonely shadow on a path of dark
A lone survivor of the broken world
A friendless shape

Lonely sprit where will u go?
Lonely spirit why do walk this path
Lonely spirit they might have missed u
Lonely spirit reach out and take my hand

A darkened shape on the road
A tortured wall of hate and pain

Give to me what I seek
Give to me a life of peace
Give to me one last wish
Give to me a soul to seek
©2006-2009 ~Darkenedblade
:icondarkenedblade:

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Looking for so long, searching through every last twist and turn but when its only pain u see then this may intest dark imagery and a hint of fantasy

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:iconholyfighter:
yo i like this poem man its just like theones i write they will be up soon but ya its good good job man!

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†"give peace to all who want peace and take it from those who give if we all do this our world would become peacefull"†

"Should I question the world? Or should the world question ME?"
:icondarkenedblade:
thanks ill have to read some of ur work once it posted

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*Alive in the dark places*
:iconholyfighter:
I mostly do all poems but ive just been so busy ive havent been able to post any of them. not to mention i have to git a better internet service so i can post faster lol.

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†"give peace to all who want peace and take it from those who give if we all do this our world would become peacefull"†

"Should I question the world? Or should the world question ME?"

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